Tattoo Quotes - Need Feedback

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Hello all! I am wanting to get a tattoo, but the first one I get will be just a short quote. I have 2 in mind, but I want to make sure they are absolutely grammatically correct! Feedback is mucho appreciated! :)

1) I crave a love so deep the ocean would be jealous. (I think a comma or the word "that" is needed between "deep" and "the"? I like how it reads without, but I don't want to get a shoddy tattoo, for pete's sake.)

2) Love me when I least deserve it because that is when I really need it.

Thank you very much!! :D
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witchlady750's avatar
Definitely missed this journal entry......... :ohnoes: